I watched him put the my trunk and other luggage inside, the only remaining pieces of my life besides this house and my name that would ever connect me to my family. The family that I had angered and disappointed so much that I, Vanilla the fifth, the first born heiress to the Meringue family would be banished from my homeland Sugaria. Off I would be sent to the melting pot of Sweet Valley. On the cab ride over I had been able to marvel quietly to myself behind my sunglasses about the inhabitants and the town. Colors of which I’ve never seen before flashed in front of my eyes. Until then all I had ever known was shades of grey and white.
We drove past a lovely mansion of a shade that I had never seen before arriving at my destination. “You can’t be serious?” I exclaimed as I whipped the sunglasses off my face when we finally came to a stop. “Miss Meringue we are here, I’ll be unloading your belongings into the cottage as Lord Gnocchi ordered. After which I will leave you to your new home and return to Sugaria.” The cabbie stated seriously as he opened the door leaving the car running before he stepped out. Thoughts flooded my mind as a began to stare down the house, only momentarily interrupted by the driver’s door closing.
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Inside I found all the basic necessities a decorated in a comforting array of white and grey. The thoughts of small came echoing back as I realized that there were only 3 rooms to this house
A common living space which made up the kitchen, dining room, and living room
A bedroom humbly decorated.
And lastly a full bathroom supplied modest amenities.
Walking back out to the living area I eyed my belongings that were carefully placed by the doorway. With the sun setting I made up my mind that I would not to unpack as it was something that I had never done and I had had enough of firsts today. And I tried to comfort myself with the thought that maybe I would only be here for a night and not the rest of my life. Yes I thought to myself with a smile beginning to form This can't be forever.
Love it. You are a great writer.
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Oh cupcake I am so glad you decided to do this! I love it!
ReplyDeleteHow sad, I'm curious as to what she did.
ReplyDeleteOH WOW! and darn that was how i was gonna have my rainbowcy founder go to sugar valley =( banished away from her family lol BUT i guess i'll have to find another way :D or....maybe i can keep it the same way....but it was AWESOME! cant't wait till the next one :D
ReplyDeleteThanks every one. Don't worry what she did will be revealed in one of the upcoming chapters. I have an idea, just need to write it out.
ReplyDeleteTinker you can still do the banishing idea too. :D
I like! This is great. I like the slight feeling of numbness there is, like she's in shock from this.
ReplyDeleteWonderful job! You are a very good writer. :D Keep it up! *reads more*
ReplyDeletethis is so awesome i like the story feel to it
ReplyDeleteThis is great so far! Going to add you to my links!
ReplyDeleteAwesome!
ReplyDeleteWaaah look at all these gens to get through!! I can't wait - this is soo good already :]
ReplyDeleteGreat start! :)
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